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Sep 7 06 8:09 AM

QUOTE (masoomshayer @ September 06, 2006 11:09 pm)
ham jab shayree kee baat karte hain bas sochte hain us par premika ka haq hai. kabhee khayal nahee ata un patniyon ka jo shayron ke mushkil swbhaw ke bawzood un se nibhatee hain un ka sath detee hain. un se pyar kartee hain un se lartee hain magar pyar kam anhee hota. meree ye nazm hai un sabhee patniyon ke nam jihono kisee kee zindgee ko baharon se saja diya par haan kabhee kabhee woh apne pati ke pyar ko pahchan nahee payeen kyon ke un ke liye kuch likha hee nahee gaya kabhee
ANil


bahut se tukron main banta hoon
bahut se doston kee hissedaree hai
zindgee maine bahut se
rishton main guzaree hai
mara kuch doston ke sath hans ke too chaltee hai
kuch doston se too jaltee hai

na tera asar badalta hai kabhee
na maree taseer badltee hai
zindgee har kash-m-kash ke bawazood
sath chaltee thee sath chaltee hai
agarche sochta rahata hoon baraha
mere kuh doston se too kyon jaltee hai
kahan mera kusoor hai kahan unkee galtee hai
na tera asar badalta hai kabhee
na maree taseer badltee hai

bahut se tukron main banta hoon main
par khud se door kab hata hoon main
gour kar mujh par main bikhra nahee hoon
jis ka hath thama tha toone kal
main aaj bhee to wahee hoon

bikhra nahee hoon bichhara nahee hoon
mere hazar tukre bhee kar diye jayen
to har tukra mujh main aur main tujh rahoonga
bakee koyee sawal na kar aye meree zindgee
yahee sach hai main yahee kahoonga

tera hath mere hathon main rahega
tera zikr meree baton main rahega
too phir bhee har lafz main kisee ko sochtee rahegee
har baat pe khafa hogee mujhe toktee rahegee
mere doston se besabab jaltee rahegee
ye sab hoga magar
zindgee tere sath chaltee hai chaltee rahegee

ye zindgee toonne dee nahee par
toone sanwaree hai
ye alag baat hai dost chhootate nahee kabhee magar
too mujhe mere har dost se pyaree hai
na tera kusoor hai na meree koyee galtee hai
bas adatan too mere kuch doston se jaltee hai
zingdee tere sath yoonn hee chalegee yoon hee chaltee hai
bas adatan too mere kuch doston se jaltee hai

anil this is the best i haver read...shayad main bhi ik aam si aurat hun...aur shayad har aurat ki taha main bhi yehi sochti hun ki kab mera hamsafar mujh par nazar karenge...kab mujhe mera jaiz maqaam denge...par na hi us nazar main wo kashish hoti hai jisse har aurat talashti hai na hi lehje main wo tapish hoti hai jisse har aurat mehsoos karna chahti hai...pata nahi kyon band kar lete hai saare mard apne aap ko kuch express karne se...shayad BIWI lafz hi hai compromises ka sacrifises...bakhoobi jaante hai aap log ke ye ab kahin nahi jaigi...band jo gai hai mujh se...jab jeena hai uske sang saari zindagi to thoda pyaar kyon na baant le...n i think anil u have done full justice to these feelings...aaj shayad meri shikayat duur hue aapse...humesha kehti thi aapse ke apne humsafar par kuch likhen...aaj aapne kamaal kar diya...khush rahen sada god bless...