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May 22 08 10:32 AM

QUOTE (piyushkmishra @ May 21, 2008 03:42 pm)
har subah
tumhaari sureeli aawaaz se jagna..
aur saare din
ek ek lafz ko
kaanon mein yun chhupa ke rakhna
ke jaise aathwan sur ho koi...

aur narm narm
halke se
kuchh lafz woh hain
jo utar jaate hain dil mein
gudgudi sa karte hue saare din..
aur honthon pe mere
muskuraate rahte hain


aur bheega bheega
chhalka sa
ek lafz woh bhi
jo chhu jaaye dard jab
aankhon mein utar aata hai
lab nahin hilte magar
aankhon se ada ho jata hai...

tumhaari aawaaz ke
rang hain kitne...
saare din
mujhe kitne hi rangon mein
rang jaate hain
ek utarta nahin
aur kitne hi rangne ko
chupke se chale aate hain!!

namaste Piyush saHeb!!
aik achchhee nas'r pe daad!! bas aik jagah aap wajaahat likh de to meh'rbaanee hogee!!
aapne :aaThwaaN sur: kaa istemaal kiyaa hai! jahaaN tak mujhe ilm hai, :aaThwaaN sur: lateefe aur majhaahiyaN taur par yaa kisee kee aawaaz kaa mazaak uRaane ke liye istemaal kiyaa jaataa hai!! aapkee nas'r aik rumaanee kaavish hai. ismeiN is alfaaz ke istemaal kee gunjaaish naheeN hai!!
maiN ghalat bhee ho sakta huN! agar aap astijaa ke kalaamoN se aisee koee misaal likh de to meh'rbaanee hogee!!

khairandesh!!

Dheer