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May 21 08 3:51 PM

wow good
free writings mast cheej hain

in the last line u can make a changege

aur kitne hi rangne ko
chupke se chale aate hain!!...change it to Bula laate hain...or jaga late hain
asif the colours were sleeping and the voice evocked !!

anyways good lines mate !!