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Jul 11 06 7:57 PM

QUOTE (Faypal @ July 10, 2006 11:04 pm)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ July 10, 2006 08:43 pm)
MUJHE AAJ BHI YAAD HAI WO PYAARA SA GAAON
WO SUNSAAN KACHI PAKKI DAGAR
JISKI SUBHEN DHUND SE BHARI HOTI THI
AUR SHAAMEIN PANCHIYON KI
CHAHCHAHATON SE GOONJTI THI
WO BAAG WO HARYAALI WO PHOOL WO DAALI
WO LEHLEHAATE KHET AUR WO NADIYA KA PANGHANT
WO MITTI KI SONDHI-SONDHI SI KHUSHBOO
AUR LEHRAATI CHANCHAL TAAZI HAWA
NA JAANE KAHAAN GUM HO GAIN WO FIZAAIN
IS SHEHER KI BHEED BHAAD MAIN KAHIN
JEENE KI JAD-O-JAHAD MAIN KAHIN
KHO GAYA HAI MERA GAAON NA JAANE KAHAAN
AB BAS YAADEIN REH GAI HAI
WO TAARON BHARI JAGMAGATI RAATON KI
WO MEETHI SI SHEETAL CHANDNI KI
WO CHANCHAL TEZ HAWAAON KI 
KAASH WO DIN PHIR SE LAUT AAI
WO BACHPAN KE DIN SUHAANE
JAHAAN JEEVAN AB BHI WOHI HAI
APNI DHEEMI RAFTAAR SE CHALTA HAI
APNI MASOOMIYAT KO SAMETE
AB BHI KUCH KEHTA HAI....KE LAUT AAO
YE WOHI TUMHAARI APNI MAATI HAI
WOHI TUMHAARA GAAON PYAARA SA
JAHAN TUMHAARA ASTITVA BASA HAI....  

Dear Aarzoo !


You have indeed retrospected so sweet bygone days in such artistic versification that I cannot help expressing what you may read as under:

Rok layta hay tayra her lafz aankhain is tarah

Daikhna purta hay ruk ruk ker tayre tusweer ko

Tayray lufzoun main nazer aaty hay mujh ko chandni

Raat bher purta hay Afzal ub tayre tehreer ko


My cheers for this creative piece.

THANKS A LOT AFZAL FOR SUCH BEAUTIFUL WORDS...UR WORDS R MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN UR WRITINGS...THANKS FOR SUCH LOVELY REVIEW....

AND THANKS ONCE ONCE AGAIN FOR WRITING SUCH BEAUTIFUL SHER...GOD BLESS...