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Aug 13 07 10:51 PM

QUOTE (Ravi Kopra @ August 08, 2007 11:32 pm)
leave everything to a lover or to God
and be humble for ever and ever

does this fulfill one's life?
is this Indian culture what it is?


Chaman, you poem reads great. I am not well gifted to make comments on poetics, but you seem to very talented in poetry. An interesting read.

mamnoon hoon,ravi ji

shukriya

chaman

dil ki sabh ranj-o-alam jabr-o-zarar bhool gayaa
us pe yeh bhool yeh sochaa ki tujhe bhool gayaa

sach hai dil jaanata to hai,tu mujhe bhool gayaa
thii nahii.n bhoolne ki baat magar bhool gayaa