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Jun 29 07 7:08 AM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ April 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

Hello sakhi ji kaise haiN aap?.....Main pehle bhi tumhaare is thread par utra tha per jaldi maiN tha....Bahoot muddat baad tumhaari is Ghazal per phir se utra hooN....Per jab bhi utrta hooN...toh bas yahi lagta hai ki kyuiN utra hooN...ab tumeh yahi lagega ki kyuiN aisa kaha....woh is liye jab koi nousikhiyaa...Gaadi galat chalata hai toh wazeh nazer aati hai...per koi driver aisa kerta hai toh takleef hoti hai.....aaj shayad teesri baar tumhaari is Ghazal per aya hooN....Itni dil kashish Ghazal tumne pesh ki hai ki socta hooN..ki tum abhi yahaan kya ker rahi ho....tumeh toh jaaker kahiN office khol ker ham jaisoN ko sikhaane ke liye bulana chahiye..our tumhare jaise ahsaas ..kaise laate haiN...hameiN bhi pata chale....per tumeh pata hai..maiN bahoot hi kadwa insaan hooN....Ghazl ke baare maiN....kam se kam aapke liye toh jaroor hooN....chchoti chhoti Galati Ghazal ka poora noor kho deti hai.....meri kalam kutchh ker baithhe is liye maiN khud hi chala jana chahta tha..per tumhaare saath aisa nahi ker sakta tha.....Daad toh khoob nikal rahihai...woh bhi dil se..per is tarah nahiN....
Sakhi ji....aapki Ghazal ke ahsaasoN ko barkaraar rakhne ki koshish maiN...aapki Ghazal pur-asar hai ya nahiN maloom nahi....lekin kam se kam...ise itna toh hona hi chahiye tha.....Doosre aap is waqt mod ban chuki haiN iske liye aapko tah-e-dil se badayii deta hooN.....

aap chaeiN toh aap is review ko agar achha na lage toh delte ker saktieN haiN....Ek baar phir daad haazir hai aapke sunder ahsaasoN ko...

tanhaaiyaa mili toh ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaadeiN teri aayieN toh tadpaa ke ro diye

jab muzhko naa dikha tha mere aas-pass koi
tab yaadeiN teri har taraf bikhra ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi bhi sang gayi
jab dukh ne aake ghera toh ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein toh ab 'sakhi'
ye baateiN yaad aayieN khud samjha ke ro diye(ye beher maiN hai lekin aapka ahsaas poora nahiN aa paya ismeiN apne ahsaas kobeher maiN hipoora keejiye..main ahsaas badal nahi sakta tha)
or
koi bhi yaad na kare hamein toh ab 'sakhi'
Ham khud hi apne dil ko samjha ke ro diye


Harash