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May 10 07 8:54 AM

QUOTE (meenu @ May 09, 2007 09:51 pm)
kuch likha hai.. aapki nazar,,,, kahe kaisa hai.. kuch kami lage to zarur bataye....


bazam mai teri aa ke hum kuch yun ruswa hue
na apna khayal raha na rukne ki zarurat rahi

tu jo masruf raha apne doston mai aye sanam
main bhi roti rahi tere aane ke intezaar mai

aanko se bharpur dekha tujhe lab na hilaye gaye
tere paas se guzar jane par hum beparda roye

aankho se dekhe sapne bhari mehfil mai humne
khud teri aagosh mai aane ko tadapte hum rahe

jo tu na aaya mere kareeb ayer mere sanam
hum khud mai hi har kami dhundhte rahe.......


MEENU

Wah Wah MEENU JI.... behad Khubsoorat Kalaam Pesh kiya hai aapne.. Pahali Baar aapko
Padha Aaj aur Padh kar Bahut Acha laga.. Aap Behad Khubsoorat Likhti hain..

Rachna ka Ek ek Lafz Behad Khubsoorat Likha hai aapne... !!!!!

aankho se dekhe sapne bhari mehfil mai humne
khud teri aagosh mai aane ko tadapte hum rahe

jo tu na aaya mere kareeb ayer mere sanam
hum khud mai hi har kami dhundhte rahe..


Last ki In 2 Lines me to aapne Kamaal hi kar diya... Daad Kubool karen Dost..!!!

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