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May 9 07 10:26 PM

QUOTE (meenu @ May 09, 2007 09:51 pm)
kuch likha hai.. aapki nazar,,,, kahe kaisa hai.. kuch kami lage to zarur bataye....


bazam mai teri aa ke hum kuch yun ruswa hue
na apna khayal raha na rukne ki zarurat rahi

tu jo masruf raha apne doston mai aye sanam
main bhi roti rahi tere aane ke intezaar mai

aanko se bharpur dekha tujhe lab na hilaye gaye
tere paas se guzar jane par hum beparda roye

aankho se dekhe sapne bhari mehfil mai humne
khud teri aagosh mai aane ko tadapte hum rahe

jo tu na aaya mere kareeb ayer mere sanam
hum khud mai hi har kami dhundhte rahe.......


MEENU

Meenu bahan aapke jazbaat ehsaas aur khyalaat bahut umda hai aur saath hi lafzo ka intekhaab bahu khoobsurat hai......aapne mujhse isme tarmeem ke liye kaha hai to mai zarur isme thoda sa raddo badal karke aapki khidmat me pesh karunga

aise hi likhti rahe...maine bhi sf me hi likhna seekha hai...

khush rahe...

aapka bhai
Asif

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