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Apr 12 07 11:54 PM

QUOTE (raahi_akela @ March 22, 2007 08:10 pm)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
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aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera  waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun[/SIZE]


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

is naye andaz me doobkar bahut achha likha aapne sakhi...khush raho....ye andaz-e-bayaN pasand aaya......mai agar kahta to kuch istarah kahta.....>>>>>

jee chahta hai ki mai raat ka ek lamha chunu
us lamhe ko mai pyar ke khwaboN se bharu
chandni bikher duN kuch is tarah har su
sang chandni ke taaroN ki baarat mai chunu


meri ek koshish,agar pasand aaye to batana..
tumhare jazbaat aur ehsaas bahut khoobsurat hai...nice one my sweeet sister Sakhi..God bless you

bhiya shukriya jo apko ye andaz pasand aay mera

apne jo likha acha laga mujhe.

apka sath yuhi bana rahe hamesha.

sakhi