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Jan 17 07 6:57 PM

QUOTE (chaman @ January 15, 2007 09:29 pm)
QUOTE (raahi_akela @ January 15, 2007 08:23 pm)
Gar bura ho waqt to Sahaare saath chhod jaate hai
Mout ke waqt to khazaane bhi saath chhod jaate hai

Gar ho gumaan-e-quwwat to tu maazi ko na bhool
Azab-e-ilaahi me to fasaane bhi saath chhod jaate hai

BahaaroN pe na itna itraa tu khizaoN ko na bhool
khizaaoN me to bhawareiN bhi saath chhod jaate hai

Saahil tu apne wajood pe itnaa takabbur na kar
Aaye toofaN to nazaare bhi saath chhod jaate hai

‘Asif’ daal de safeena dariyaa me patwaar ki fikr na kar
Imtahaan-e-ishq me to parwaane bhi saath chhod jaate hai

Assala-alaikum Asif Bhai!

Aapka kalaam bahut hi umda hai.

Ye mehfil to maine kal hi join ki hai, lekin aapke ashaar ke baare me ghaur kiya hai ki, aapke kalaam ka mauzu hamesha hi, kuchh hat ke hota hai.Aise mauzu jinka aam aadmi khayaal bhi nahin karta.English me jise 'out of the box' kehte hain.

Aapke kalaam ke baare me qaabil-e-ghaur ek baat ye bhi hai, ki aapke kalaam mein ghazab ki sanjeedgi aur maturity hai.

And finally, ek baat, jo mujh jaisa sukhanwar bahut jhijhakte hue hi keh sakta hai, wo ye ki aap ki shayri ab kaafi strong ho chuki hai, technically.Gunjaaish to hamesha hi rehti hai.Par aap ke kalaam me musalsal nikhaar aa raha hai, ye tayshuda baat hai.

Is se zyada mai kuchh kehne laayaq nahin hun.Chhota munh, badi baat ho jayegi.

Koi ghalti ho to 'chhota bhai' samajh ke muaaf keejiyega.

Apna khayaal rakhiyega!

TUMHARA IS MAHFIL ME KHAIRMAQDAM KARTA HU....INSHALLAH YAHA TUMKO BAHUT PYAR AUR APNAPAN MILEGA KYUKI YAHA MAJOURITY MATURE SHAYARO KI HAI.....MERE KALAAM PAR NAZRESAANI KII SHUKRIYA.....ALLAH TUMKO HAR KHUSHI ATAA KAREY...

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