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Jan 16 07 10:58 PM

QUOTE (chaman @ January 16, 2007 09:04 pm)
Aadab Aarzu!

Aapke kalaam ki taareef me wahi ghise-pite alfaaz istemaal karte hue achchha to nahin lagta ,phir bhi kehna to padega ki waakai behtareen ghazal hai.Beautiful!!

Sirf ek maamooli si kami hai--Beher ki.Yaqeenan beher pe command haasil karna ek ghazal likhne me sabse dushwaar kaam hai.Mai khud isi se sabse zyada pareshan hota hun, jab koi ghazal likhta hun.

Still u have portrayed remarkable efficiency at handling this demon called "beher".
Keep writing.Ur poetry motivates novices like me!!

Take care.

rashid dil ko behad massarat milli hai ke aapko meri ye adna si koshish pasand aai hai...ab likhne ka maza aaiga...yunhi sath dete rahiyega...chalte chalte shayad koi aisa kalaam likh dun..jo zindagi ka haasil ban jaai...khush rahen.