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Jan 16 07 9:04 PM

Aadab Aarzu!

Aapke kalaam ki taareef me wahi ghise-pite alfaaz istemaal karte hue achchha to nahin lagta ,phir bhi kehna to padega ki waakai behtareen ghazal hai.Beautiful!!

Sirf ek maamooli si kami hai--Beher ki.Yaqeenan beher pe command haasil karna ek ghazal likhne me sabse dushwaar kaam hai.Mai khud isi se sabse zyada pareshan hota hun, jab koi ghazal likhta hun.

Still u have portrayed remarkable efficiency at handling this demon called "beher".
Keep writing.Ur poetry motivates novices like me!!

Take care.

Rashid...