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Dec 21 06 12:12 AM

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Tujhe zindagi main laana chahti hun
Apni taqdeer banaana chahti hun

Chupa lun tujhe duniya ki nigaahon se
Cheen kar jahaan se apna banaana chahti hun

Baharon ki tamanna liye nigaahon main
Aa meri jaan tujhe gungunana chahti hun

Jeene ki wajah tu hi to hai ai humdam
Tujhe zindagi ka bahaana banaana chahti hun

Gam-e-hijr main bhi tera hi tassavur hai
Shab-e-firaq main bhi muskuraana chahti hun

Teri ankhon main wo kashish wo nasha hai
Tere suroor main doobne ka bahaana chahti hun

Tere ishq ki jaadugari ka wo asar hai
Tere pyaar main sar jhukaana chahti hun
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Dec 21 06 12:23 AM

AARZOO

WAH WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA

AHSAS KO ITANE ACHE SABDO ME PIROYA

DIL KO CHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GAYA

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PYAR KO ITANA PYAR SE LIKHA HE HUM KYA KAHE LAJABAB

SADA KHUSH RAHE MERI PYARI BAHANA

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SHAKUN PANCHHI LAYE AAS
SHUKOON KA LAYE AHSAS

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Dec 21 06 10:16 AM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ December 21, 2006 12:12 am)
Tujhe zindagi main laana chahti hun
Apni taqdeer banaana chahti hun

Chupa lun tujhe duniya ki nigaahon se
Cheen kar jahaan se apna banaana chahti hun

Baharon ki tamanna liye nigaahon main
Aa meri jaan tujhe gungunana chahti hun

Jeene ki wajah tu hi to hai ai humdam
Tujhe zindagi ka bahaana banaana chahti hun

Gam-e-hijr main bhi tera hi tassavur hai
Shab-e-firaq main bhi muskuraana chahti hun

Teri ankhon main wo kashish wo nasha hai
Tere suroor main doobne ka bahaana chahti hun

Tere ishq ki jaadugari ka wo asar hai
Tere pyaar main sar jhukaana chahti hun

wahhhhhh...........bahot khoob........har sher tarasha hua....ek mukaamal gazal hai yeh....bahut accha lagga aapko padna, dil ke kareeb rahi aapki gazal, yu hi likhti rahiye.... bhagwaan aapki kalam mai.n aur nikhar laaye....!

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mahiya menu yaad aavNda,
mahiya aayega taaN kushiya manavaNgi,
usde raaha.n vich palka vichavaNngi,
dukh daahde te zind.di malook,
mahiya menu yaad aavNda"

"Eh aasmaa.n wale zameen par uttar ke dekh,
Hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad ke dekh......"

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Dec 21 06 2:24 PM

Aarzoo di namaste ,...... bahut khub likha hai

aarz hai

hum aapse kya aur ab kahe
jeene ki aarzoo ban gayi ho
tere wajood se hun mein khush
tere haasi se hai meri zindagi

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Dec 21 06 5:13 PM

Sis ek ur nagina aapke chir parichit andaaz mein...!!! wah, maza agaya.!! bahaut khhob hai aapki ghazal. aapki shabdo aur ahesaaso ka jo saath hai wo bahaut hi asardaar hai. aapko parhne ke baad bari der tak main uss jaadooi maahaul mein gum rehati hoon aur jaane kab tak bas aapke shabdo ko man hi man gungunati rehti hoon.

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Dec 23 06 2:26 AM

QUOTE (shakun @ December 21, 2006 12:23 am)
AARZOO

WAH WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA

AHSAS KO ITANE ACHE SABDO ME PIROYA

DIL KO CHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GAYA

DAAD KE LIYE SABDO KI KUMI LAG RAHI HE ATISUNDER justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif

PYAR KO ITANA PYAR SE LIKHA HE HUM KYA KAHE LAJABAB

SADA KHUSH RAHE MERI PYARI BAHANA

ISH BAGIYA KO YESE HI MAHAKAYE RAKHANA justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif

bohot bohot shukriyaa shakun sis...god bless...itne pyaar se padhne ke liye aur pasand karne ke liye...god bless...yunhi apna sath banaai rakhna...

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Dec 23 06 3:52 AM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ December 21, 2006 06:42 am)
Tujhe zindagi main laana chahti hun
Apni taqdeer banaana chahti hun

Chupa lun tujhe duniya ki nigaahon se
Cheen kar jahaan se apna banaana chahti hun

Baharon ki tamanna liye nigaahon main
Aa meri jaan tujhe gungunana chahti hun

Jeene ki wajah tu hi to hai ai humdam
Tujhe zindagi ka bahaana banaana chahti hun

Gam-e-hijr main bhi tera hi tassavur hai
Shab-e-firaq main bhi muskuraana chahti hun

Teri ankhon main wo kashish wo nasha hai
Tere suroor main doobne ka bahaana chahti hun

Tere ishq ki jaadugari ka wo asar hai
Tere pyaar main sar jhukaana chahti hun

Salam ddjaan,

Tujhe zindagi main laana chahti hun
Apni taqdeer banaana chahti hun

lekin kaisay lau usay zindagi meh
Apni in hatho ki lakero meh dekhi hai unhay
Lkein beatu kaisay...


Halay dil ki baat beyan kerdi apnay!!!

Bhaut khubsurat.

God Bless:)

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Dec 23 06 7:03 PM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ December 21, 2006 10:37 pm)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ December 21, 2006 12:12 am)
Tujhe zindagi main laana chahti hun
Apni taqdeer banaana chahti hun

Chupa lun tujhe duniya ki nigaahon se
Cheen kar jahaan se apna banaana chahti hun

Baharon ki tamanna liye nigaahon main
Aa meri jaan tujhe gungunana chahti hun

Jeene ki wajah tu hi to hai ai humdam
Tujhe zindagi ka bahaana banaana chahti hun

Gam-e-hijr main bhi tera hi tassavur hai
Shab-e-firaq main bhi muskuraana chahti hun

Teri ankhon main wo kashish wo nasha hai
Tere suroor main doobne ka bahaana chahti hun
[COLOR=blue][I]
Tere ishq ki jaadugari ka wo asar hai
Tere pyaar main sar jhukaana chahti hun

Tujhe zindagi main laana chahti hun
Apni taqdeer banaana chahti hun

Aisi takdeeroN mein khuda kahaan
Janhaan Ranjo-gum rehte haiN


Chupa lun tujhe duniya ki nigaahon se
Cheen kar jahaan se apna banaana chahti hun

kathhni kerni maiN zameeN asmaN ka faraq
Is zahaaN mein aise bhi log rehte haiN.


Baharon ki tamanna liye nigaahon main
Aa meri jaan tujhe gungunana chahti hun

sur ki abhav meiN kya gungunayeinge
baharoN ki tamanna jo dil mein rakhte haiN


Jeene ki wajah tu hi to hai ai humdam
Tujhe zindagi ka bahaana banaana chahti hun

Apna bana ke yuiN hi bahanoN meiN uljhana
sitam us per bhi jeene ki wajah rakhte haiN


Gam-e-hijr main bhi tera hi tassavur hai
Shab-e-firaq main bhi muskuraana chahti hun

muskrahatoN ki toh yakeenan tumeh kami nahi
jo Gam-e-hijr ko bhi khushi kehte haiN


Teri ankhon main wo kashish wo nasha hai
Tere suroor main doobne ka bahaana chahti hun

BahanoN ki baar baar apni manjil bana
uski aankhoN ko ise chhalna kehte hain.


Tere ishq ki jaadugari ka wo asar hai
Tere pyaar main sar jhukaana chahte hain

Sar jhuka ker tere paanv khheechne ki ada,
bahoot khoob hai teri jadoogari hi kehte hain

Harashhhhhh aapke reviews itne khoobsurat hote hai ke mujhe phir se likhne par majboor karte hai...bohot hi khoobsurati se mere har sher ki keeemat padha dii aapne apne jawaab se...Shukriya is izzat afzaai ka...God bless.


Aisi takdeeroN mein khuda kahaan
Janhaan Ranjo-gum rehte haiN

Ranj-o-gam main pal kar hi
ishq ki raahen tay karte hain


kathhni kerni maiN zameeN asmaN ka faraq
Is zahaaN mein aise bhi log rehte haiN


Dil ko na samajh sake kaisa dost hai
Jo dil ko tod kar muskuraaya karte hain


sur ki abhav meiN kya gungunayeinge
baharoN ki tamanna jo dil mein rakhte haiN


Sache pyaar ki nishaani hai ye khamoshi
Dil ka dard ai bewafa tu kya jaane hain



Apna bana ke yuiN hi bahanoN meiN uljhana
sitam us per bhi jeene ki wajah rakhte haiN



Qatra-qatra ansoo pee kar muskuraana
Hum dard mand aisa bhi hunar rakhte hain


muskrahatoN ki toh yakeenan tumeh kami nahi
jo Gam-e-hijr ko bhi khushi kehte haiN


Apne hasraton ko dafn karke bhi muskuraana
Ye kissi aam shaqs ki bas ki baat nahi hain


BahanoN ki baar baar apni manjil bana
uski aankhoN ko ise chhalna kehte hain

Chal to hum apni zindagi rahe hai
Jo bewafa pe mar kar bhi muskuraa rahe hain...


Sar jhuka ker tere paanv khheechne ki ada,
bahoot khoob hai teri jadoogari hi kehte hain



Jhoote waadon ke jaal main phaans kar
Khoob dosti nibhaate hai dil ko zakhm dete hain...

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Dec 23 06 9:05 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ December 21, 2006 12:12 am)
Tujhe zindagi main laana chahti hun
Apni taqdeer banaana chahti hun

Chupa lun tujhe duniya ki nigaahon se
Cheen kar jahaan se apna banaana chahti hun

Baharon ki tamanna liye nigaahon main
Aa meri jaan tujhe gungunana chahti hun

Jeene ki wajah tu hi to hai ai humdam
Tujhe zindagi ka bahaana banaana chahti hun

Gam-e-hijr main bhi tera hi tassavur hai
Shab-e-firaq main bhi muskuraana chahti hun

Teri ankhon main wo kashish wo nasha hai
Tere suroor main doobne ka bahaana chahti hun

Tere ishq ki jaadugari ka wo asar hai
Tere pyaar main sar jhukaana chahti hun

AARZOO BAHAN AAPKA HAR KALAAM APNE ME EK SADAF HAI....KIS SHER KI TAREEF KARU KISKO CHODU BAHUT MUSHKIL HAI ...aLLAH AAPKO AISE HI LIKHNE KI SALAHIYAT SE NAWAZE....DAAD QUBOOL KIJIYE

Asif Jamil (raahi_akela)

Parwaaz ab kar na sakega,Qatar diye hai par
parinda hu jo aazadi ke khyaal pahuchata raha

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Dec 23 06 10:15 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ December 23, 2006 07:03 pm)
QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ December 21, 2006 10:37 pm)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ December 21, 2006 12:12 am)
Tujhe zindagi main laana chahti hun
Apni taqdeer banaana chahti hun

Chupa lun tujhe duniya ki nigaahon se
Cheen kar jahaan se apna banaana chahti hun

Baharon ki tamanna liye nigaahon main
Aa meri jaan tujhe gungunana chahti hun

Jeene ki wajah tu hi to hai ai humdam
Tujhe zindagi ka bahaana banaana chahti hun

Gam-e-hijr main bhi tera hi tassavur hai
Shab-e-firaq main bhi muskuraana chahti hun

Teri ankhon main wo kashish wo nasha hai
Tere suroor main doobne ka bahaana chahti hun
[COLOR=blue][I]
Tere ishq ki jaadugari ka wo asar hai
Tere pyaar main sar jhukaana chahti hun

Tujhe zindagi main laana chahti hun
Apni taqdeer banaana chahti hun

Aisi takdeeroN mein khuda kahaan
Janhaan Ranjo-gum rehte haiN


Chupa lun tujhe duniya ki nigaahon se
Cheen kar jahaan se apna banaana chahti hun

kathhni kerni maiN zameeN asmaN ka faraq
Is zahaaN mein aise bhi log rehte haiN.


Baharon ki tamanna liye nigaahon main
Aa meri jaan tujhe gungunana chahti hun

sur ki abhav meiN kya gungunayeinge
baharoN ki tamanna jo dil mein rakhte haiN


Jeene ki wajah tu hi to hai ai humdam
Tujhe zindagi ka bahaana banaana chahti hun

Apna bana ke yuiN hi bahanoN meiN uljhana
sitam us per bhi jeene ki wajah rakhte haiN


Gam-e-hijr main bhi tera hi tassavur hai
Shab-e-firaq main bhi muskuraana chahti hun

muskrahatoN ki toh yakeenan tumeh kami nahi
jo Gam-e-hijr ko bhi khushi kehte haiN


Teri ankhon main wo kashish wo nasha hai
Tere suroor main doobne ka bahaana chahti hun

BahanoN ki baar baar apni manjil bana
uski aankhoN ko ise chhalna kehte hain.


Tere ishq ki jaadugari ka wo asar hai
Tere pyaar main sar jhukaana chahte hain

Sar jhuka ker tere paanv khheechne ki ada,
bahoot khoob hai teri jadoogari hi kehte hain

Harashhhhhh aapke reviews itne khoobsurat hote hai ke mujhe phir se likhne par majboor karte hai...bohot hi khoobsurati se mere har sher ki keeemat padha dii aapne apne jawaab se...Shukriya is izzat afzaai ka...God bless.


Aisi takdeeroN mein khuda kahaan
Janhaan Ranjo-gum rehte haiN

Ranj-o-gam main pal kar hi
ishq ki raahen tay karte hain


kathhni kerni maiN zameeN asmaN ka faraq
Is zahaaN mein aise bhi log rehte haiN


Dil ko na samajh sake kaisa dost hai
Jo dil ko tod kar muskuraaya karte hain


sur ki abhav meiN kya gungunayeinge
baharoN ki tamanna jo dil mein rakhte haiN


Sache pyaar ki nishaani hai ye khamoshi
Dil ka dard ai bewafa tu kya jaane hain



Apna bana ke yuiN hi bahanoN meiN uljhana
sitam us per bhi jeene ki wajah rakhte haiN



Qatra-qatra ansoo pee kar muskuraana
Hum dard mand aisa bhi hunar rakhte hain


muskrahatoN ki toh yakeenan tumeh kami nahi
jo Gam-e-hijr ko bhi khushi kehte haiN


Apne hasraton ko dafn karke bhi muskuraana
Ye kissi aam shaqs ki bas ki baat nahi hain


BahanoN ki baar baar apni manjil bana
uski aankhoN ko ise chhalna kehte hain

Chal to hum apni zindagi rahe hai
Jo bewafa pe mar kar bhi muskuraa rahe hain...


Sar jhuka ker tere paanv khheechne ki ada,
bahoot khoob hai teri jadoogari hi kehte hain



Jhoote waadon ke jaal main phaans kar
Khoob dosti nibhaate hai dil ko zakhm dete hain...

Bahoot khoob...hunar nikhaarne ke liye khoob chali aandhi uljha raha jismein umra bhar Gandhi.......


Ranj-o-gam main pal kar hi
ishq ki raahen tay karte hain

Ronjo-o-gum hi kyuiN kareeb mile
Khuda kare tuzhe tera habeeb mile.


Dil ko na samajh sake kaisa dost hai
Jo dil ko tod kar muskuraaya karte hain

Dost ki parakh tere zigar meiN kahaN
Doondne chale toh dar-bader mile.



Sache pyaar ki nishaani hai ye khamoshi
Dil ka dard ai bewafa tu kya jaane hain

khamoshi ki kader kerti hain ye aankheiN
Dar hai ki zubaaN se kat.ta na zeher mile.


Qatra-qatra ansoo pee kar muskuraana
Hum dard mand aisa bhi hunar rakhte hai

Ashq bahana our muskarana ai humnashieN
murda-parastoN ki nishani khuda kare na mile.


Apne hasraton ko dafn karke bhi muskuraana
Ye kissi aam shaqs ki bas ki baat nahi hain


Ye dafn karke ye shaam judayii ka paigam layi hai
har taraf ik ajeeb si udaasi khuda kare ki na mile.


Chal to hum apni zindagi rahe hai
Jo bewafa pe mar kar bhi muskuraa rahe hain...

katal hone se pehle talwaar kise nazer ayi hai
jo be-wafa hain unhe lagta hai ki unhe be-wafa hi mile.


Jhoote waadon ke jaal main phaans kar
Khoob dosti nibhaate hai dil ko zakhm dete hain...

Izzat bakhshi ka naam ager jaal-phaans hai nazneen
Khuda kare ki ye nadaani sabhi hunar pasand ko mile.


Ye phaansna woh shabd nahi jo shayari mein badal sake
Itna zameeN pe utar gaye hunar shabd mein na badal sake.



Harash

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Dec 24 06 12:44 PM

QUOTE (Asif jamil @ December 23, 2006 09:05 pm)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ December 21, 2006 12:12 am)
Tujhe zindagi main laana chahti hun
Apni taqdeer banaana chahti hun

Chupa lun tujhe duniya ki nigaahon se
Cheen kar jahaan se apna banaana chahti hun

Baharon ki tamanna liye nigaahon main
Aa meri jaan tujhe gungunana chahti hun

Jeene ki wajah tu hi to hai ai humdam
Tujhe zindagi ka bahaana banaana chahti hun

Gam-e-hijr main bhi tera hi tassavur hai
Shab-e-firaq main bhi muskuraana chahti hun

Teri ankhon main wo kashish wo nasha hai
Tere suroor main doobne ka bahaana chahti hun

Tere ishq ki jaadugari ka wo asar hai
Tere pyaar main sar jhukaana chahti hun

AARZOO BAHAN AAPKA HAR KALAAM APNE ME EK SADAF HAI....KIS SHER KI TAREEF KARU KISKO CHODU BAHUT MUSHKIL HAI ...aLLAH AAPKO AISE HI LIKHNE KI SALAHIYAT SE NAWAZE....DAAD QUBOOL KIJIYE

Ye aapka pyaar hai jo aisa kehta hai asif bhai...warna main to yunhi likhti hun...koshish kar rahi hun likhne ki...phir bhi doston ko gila hai ke kam likhte hai...dil chalni aur chaak jigar karte hai...muskuraake gam naseeb karte hai...apna khayaal rakhiyega.



kabhi gul to kabhi kaante naseeb hue...
kabhi rafeeq to kabhi habeeb naseeb hue...
raas na aaya shayarana safar zindagi ka...
kabhi gam to kabhi doston ke gile naseeb hue...

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Dec 24 06 12:49 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ December 21, 2006 12:12 am)

Baharon ki tamanna liye nigaahon main
Aa meri jaan tujhe gungunana chahti hun

Jeene ki wajah tu hi to hai ai humdam
Tujhe zindagi ka bahaana banaana chahti hun

Gam-e-hijr main bhi tera hi tassavur hai
Shab-e-firaq main bhi muskuraana chahti hun


Nice !! bhaut khoob Aarjoo ji!!

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